Potential crime, suspense movie waiting to be made

If I could write a script, I'd put my time and effort on Mental Dental (MBP)
Why?
It's got all the ingredients for a box office smasher.

Ingenuity, strong story, composition, deep evil, realistically frightening characters and although it is a work of fiction, is it too far removed from the truth?

The Usual Suspects meets Dentistry.
An enthralling and entangling story line dotted with clever deaths and psychopathic shenanigans that need to be stopped.

A unique story that will keep you guessing and hooked from start to finish.
The main character of the story struggles against all odds to overcome her status of murder suspect to Heroine.
This is a nail biting thriller full of twists and turns, one you need to get your teeth into to (pun intended).
Following the sudden and unexpected death of a patient on the dentist chair in her practice, Dr Jessie Stack is facing her worst nightmare. Discredited and facing incarceration, she has to try and fathom out what really happened,
Accused of murder, her world in a spin...

If there is a producer out there looking for a story to script, this is it

Judge for yourselves.... Murder mystery

Potential best selling Novel

The Ultimate Phantasms in the Infirmary.
Our new book has the potential and pedigree to succeed.
Why?  Well evidence, only after 1day of being published, it had 181likes on Facebook and has sold a few copies of the paperback edition already.
The other factors include Halloween and maybe even Xmas gift considereration.
This book makes an ideal present for doctors, nurses and medics throughout the English speaking world.
It's not heavy and arduous reading and could be enjoyed by anyone with an interest in the occult or supernatural.
The short stories lend themselves to reading between work,  enough to immerse the reader into the world of imagination without totally separating them from the real world and tasks at hand.

It's a very enjoyable genre too.

The paperback version is available on the createspace website and Amazon websites.
There is a reasonably priced Kindle version too.

The link below will direct you to the paperback version.

Ultimate PITI

Enjoy and please don't have nightmares...!

Open Wide

Mental Dental is a wonderful work of fiction.

The story involves a dentist trying to prove her innocence,  stumbling on a BIG  problem...

Deaths are occurring in a scattered fashion,  unseen, under the radar, unchallenged...

Jessie Stack now has to get to the "root"  of the problem.

What follows is some of the shenanigans that she detects...

The procedure would involve cleaning up the area, re-cementing the cap back and then home.
A simple procedure that would not be at all complicated and a danger level of Nil…
However something went drastically wrong, the patient seemed to become agitated soon after the Lidocaine, local anaesthetic was injected.
According to the report, the lady began to call for help as she sat in the examination chair, as if writhing with excruciating pain.
Jessie read on with interest as the report stated that Mrs Barr then proceeded to get up of the chair, slinging herself towards the tray with all the instruments, grabbed a scalpel that was on the tray and stabbed herself several times...

If this has triggered your interest,  then download it and open wide...
Dentists

Phobic Wars IS a Hit

It Is reasuring that One Of my Old friends hw read Phobic wars and he loves it.
He comMented that In his opinion this was the best of my stories
Ironic as it has the worst reviews
I love it ..
He IS encouraging me to write a follow up story to phobic wars ...
IM considering this now. I always thought it had potential but my poor editing of it spoilt its reception
watch this space ...